A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch, and What did you change, based on the feedback?
Unfortunately, I missed the deadline on submitting my elevator pitch #1, so I was not able to receive any feedback, but I used the other assignments to gauge the changes that I needed to make with my product in order to tweak it to the needs of my target audience.
Hello Travis! That sounds like a good idea. I would love to see like a map of where these pits would be located. So your target audience would be students that are searching for a study area and students that want to eat something healthy? Overall, you did pretty well with your pitch and I'm looking forward on looking your idea happen :)
ReplyDeleteTravis, I think you did a great job of presenting yourself in a professional manner and delivering your pitch with confidence and poise. I think that this is a very interesting idea due to the fact that no cafe or restaurant has carried out your vision yet. Places like Panera have similar ideas but could really do a better job of setting up nicer areas. Feel free to check out my post here: http://jakesmithent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteEssentially, what you are proposing a sorta of smoothie-version of the existing Pascal's. Your idea is much more indepth though with a focus on bringing in other companies as well. There may be some challenges with this as some of the firms mentioned have their own facilities and capabilities thus lack a reason for such a regular partnership. Anyway, check out my blog at: http://entspring16.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHi! I think this is an awesome idea! I know i definitely had this issue while i was living on campus, it is not so much of an issue now but I can see it would be great for future generations at UF. Being able to find a good place to study and eat is very difficult. Also you did a great job representing yourself here! This is the link to my pitch if you are interested! http://anaksunamoon216.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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